Friday, June 29, 2007

TEN THINGS I HATE ABOUT YOU


I hate you when you decipher my gloom without hearing my voice

I hate you when you are the first thought on my mind in the morning with a thousand more things craving for my attention

I hate you when every moonlit night,every surge on the ocean’s face ,the first drop of a summer shower or most simply a silent moment reminds me of you

I hate you when any string soulfully struck brings your radiant face flickering before my eyes

I hate you when I seek for you mindlessly in every crowd,every street,every corner.every edifice or even in the expanse of nothingness

I hate you when you make me smile at your little stupidities

I hate you when you spoil me with your care and concern...pampering me like a child

I hate you for the moments when you leave me speechless with your stunning charm and seraphic beauty

I hate you when you say ‘goodbye’ and leave my heart wailing like a baby

I hate you when I find myself loving you more and more...

15 comments:

In Search Of... said...

Fabulous!!!
I did not know that hatred can be so fair, so beautiful...
Perhaps if every one starts HATING every other person on this earth, this world will become a paradise.

Keep up the gud work!!!

wildflower said...

so u r hating ur way to love, haan?
*wink*

KAYLEE said...

haha fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!! nice blog!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

ruthless emotions :)

A very good piece

The Lad said...

Wow..read sch a wonderfl piece after so so long..
great great work!!!

:)

Loved it to the core!

................your's entirely said...

@ everyone who read and will read
thanx for reading and maybe liking it.this piece is very close to my heart...

annie said...

And the love doesn't stop loving even when she isn't there...hate that too!!

Nice blog...writings as close to mine.

................your's entirely said...

@annie
thanks for dropping by....lovely comment....that is the 11th thing i hate about her :)

annie said...

:)...i hate that too!!Love doesn't stop loving him..so cruel (of him not me).

Anonymous said...

Excellent piece!!! Probably once you have hated ;) someone so much, dont think you can really feel the same for anyone else

Anonymous said...

Blogrolled ya

................your's entirely said...

@ bonne foi
thanx for that....keep frequenting please.

Anonymous said...

who cud "YOU" be other than ur soul

Anonymous said...

who cud "YOU" be other than ur soul!!!

Nightingale* said...

In one word..."Wonderful!!"