Wednesday, October 31, 2007

TEN THINGS I LOVE ABOUT YOU


I love you for the hopes and dreams my heart had fondly weaved at your glorious advent.

I love you for the magnitude to which I miss those sensuous springs,those snug winters,those soothing showers and most of all ‘you’.

I love you for all the lovely memories of the moments we spent as ‘ONE’.

I love you for the glimmer that your glimpse brings to my eyes and the gloom that shrouds when the thought of never being able to be your’s crosses me.


I love you for the pretensions of concern you were so good at.

I love you for the deceit you inflicted on my heart.

I love you for the infinities of solitude in which I now dwell.

I love you for the torment which I bear and the distrust which I now nurture.

I love you for the excruciating way you made me comprehend that life is not always fair.

I love you for your love that never was...




12 comments:

Pragyan said...

Extraordinarily excellent!!!Unlucky is d gal who never reciprocated ur feelings..be it be fictional or a reality.very beautifully expressed!!hats off to u :)

Pragyan said...

And I cant just take my eyes off your blog now.Too too n tooo good!!!I think its d best one till date...marvellous writing!!n superb emotions!!

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@ pragyan
oh! thanks again :)fictional or reality....well...

Anonymous said...

Wonderful. Tooooooooo sweet and it got me to tears!!!!!!

wildflower said...

You plagiarize mine!
kiddin' again!..no piece of art suited my post like your pic did...

wildflower said...

I love you for the deceit you inflicted on my heart

I love you for your love that never was...

Words as these...immortalize your love !

If you know hindi, will have to tell you something...'pyaar kabhi pura nahin hota, pyaar ka pehla akshar bhi adhura hota hai!'

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@wildflower
1.ya then we can unleash a chain of plagiarisms on each other...wow!!
2.i definitely know hindi...don't know about my love but ur quote certainly did immortalize this post of mine
thank you :)

annie said...

Am as it is not in a cheerful mood today and this post only added to my tears.It wud be rong to comment on ur feelings but trust me i know what it feels like.

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@ annie
hey lady i m sorry.did'nt mean to hurt u....just expressed myself :(

wildflower said...

this is the best love poem ever!
it's wrings tears out of my heart...

An absolute piece of art!

betrayal (more than love) is the fuel of a writer...

wildflower said...

when can we expect more stuff like this? :D
So enervating!

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@ wildflower

well thank you very much :)
well I can't say when but hope my every creation strikes the right cords of my reader's hearts