Thursday, November 22, 2007



Don’t you see what you have done to me?
Don’t you see how I have changed?

I waltz in the rain
I gaze at stars
I smile at strangers every now and then
I hop on stairs

Don’t you see what you have done to me?
Don’t you see how I have changed?

I walk alone on untrodden paths
I halt and sometimes talk to the air
I scribble your name on lil’ scraps
I treasure your stuff with utmost care

Don’t you see what you have done to me?
Don’t you see how I have changed?

I love the sense of your thought in my head
I like the feel of your name on my lips
It’s funny how I cherish your presence even in your absence
You are my existence now


I dream you…I wish you
I live you now.


Don’t you see what you have done to me?
Don’t you see how I have changed?

I don’t love you like I loved you yesterday
I love you more
I have to admit…..I really do.

16 comments:

annie said...

U don seem to be ok..high on nostalgia?tc bud..

................your's entirely said...

i am OK with NOSTALGIA....used to life of this kind!thanks for the concern

Pragyan said...

nice one!!!

................your's entirely said...

@ pragyan

maybe u will 'get tired of complementing me' :)
thank u very much

d SINNER!!! said...

hmmm....

andr gr8 blog i stumbled upon! well, images used are very complementin..gr8 wrk...

'Don't u c what u hav done to me'....
one question, thousand answers...

keep scribblin!

................your's entirely said...

@ d sinner
thank you...keep frequenting:)

annie said...

U stopped frequentin me...!!!!

Ronak said...
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Ronak said...

Awesome is a word that won't do full justice to your post so AWESOME

wildflower said...

your words are so much brimming with love
and the emotions are so clearly stated...
honest and moving & lovable of course...

................your's entirely said...

@ ronak
oh !! thank you.....thank you very much

................your's entirely said...

@ wildflower
thanks for the appreciation dear....keep frequenting

Lena said...

it is awesome, i cant find words but it made me smile all the way while reading
you managed to pass over this amazing feeling :)

I am a lucky person to have got to read this one :)

................your's entirely said...

@ lena
thanks for visiting...keep dropping by

Anonymous said...

ur post is in rythm with the song 'The Reason' of Hoobstank...do tune into it..

THE WORLD IS IN ME said...

dude u r a super poet...man i never knw this amit at college