Saturday, December 29, 2007

30 mins with you



The seemingly harsh rays of the sun shone on her imparting her that divine glow.She wilted in discomfort and snuggled up closer seeking solace in my embrace.Her silky curls kissed my chin,another brush with divinity.I slowly removed those strands that hung over her face revealing that indolent radiance emanating from her eyes...I took her delicate hands in mine and my fingers began drawing various patterns on the lithe skin on them.She chuckled playfully in response to the tickle,that nectar like timbre dissolved in me satiating innumerable desires.

A gentle breeze made it’s way into the room as the sun prepared to pack up after shimmering all through the long winter day.she trembled submissively as the chill even made me cuddle upto her.I protectively ensheilded her.She languidly reached out for the steaming coffee and sipped from the mug a couple of times still reclined more on me than on the bed unaware of the gaze of admiration with which I followed her every movement all the while.I sneaked out slowly and knelt beside her with a bottle of nail paint and smeared yet another coat on her toe nails...”she will manage to spoil them soon”,I murmured to myself and a smile unpretentiously adorned my lips.She turned and I drew close to rest my head on her lap...”are the heavens more snug?”.
Still lying calm and stationary I hummed the blissful tune to myself as the jingle of the A R Rahman composition sailed along from the music player...’hum hai iss pal yahan...’.

9 comments:

Pragyan said...

Subtle work :)

chinmaya said...

mindblowing,mesmerising,magnificient........carryon

................your's entirely said...

@ pragyan
thanks....GOD bless u :-)

@ chinmaya
thanks for the appreciation....keep visiting frequently

Mez said...

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!

Do i need to say more?

Nightingale* said...

Beautiful..!.Really.

mayz said...

ah!!! The Sublime...
The Human...and Love....

Beautiful!!!

................your's entirely said...

@ nightingale
thank u for the appreciation

................your's entirely said...

@ mayz

it's beautiful readers like u that make the writting beautiful....thank u

Don's scribblings.. said...

I loved this one the most. Grt imagery and expressive language.
I cdnt get u still from ur id ??